Note below are the originals from yesterday and the corrections.
TAKE YOUR TIME WITH THE TEN NEW SENTENCES. YESTERDAY'S GRADES WERE HORRENDOUS!
1. She felt bad about missing the school board meeting, but her editor fired her irregardless of her excuse.
2. We will all join together in prayer for the students who died in the shooting, and we will fly the flags at half-mast.
3. It's alright if you miss class for a job interview. you can make up the the test tomorrow.
4. We'll divide the workload between the students.
5. The St. Joseph Board of Commissioners are planing to submit a proposal for a bond issue to pay for road improvements, and they are hopping the election committee will reach a consensus of opinion to put the issue on the ballot.
6. I know you are anxious to get this job, but each of the applicants will have a chance to discuss their strengths and weaknesses with the personel director.
7. Based on your writing skills, it looks like you could be a good journalist.
8. Each of the students is going to receive a plaque with their diplomas at graduation.
9. She was embarrassed that she had less than five answers correct on the quiz.
10. After the boss read the report, he gave it to Jim and I to rewrite then said its due back on Monday.
Yesterday's corrections:
1. She felt badly about missing the school board meeting, but her editor fired her regardless of her excuse.
2. We will join together in prayer for the students who died in the shooting; the flags will fly at half-mast.
3. It's all right if you miss class for a job interview; you can make up the test tomorrow.
4. We'll divide the workload among three students.
5. The St. Joseph Board of commissioners is planning to submit a proposal for a bond issue to pay for road improvements, and they are hoping the election committee will reach a consensus to put the issue on the ballot.
6. I know you are anxious to get this job, but each of the applicants will have an opportunity to discuss his strengths with the personnel director.
7. Based upon your writing skills, it looks like you could be a good journalist.
8. Each of the students will receive a plaque with his diploma at graduation.
9. She was embarrassed that she had fewer than five answers correct on the quiz.
10. After the boss read the report, he gave it to Jim and me and then said it's due back on Monday.
Easy: 10 more; take your time. I would suggest you review the handout again! Note that not all the sentences contain errors; some, however, have more than one.
1. The people that attended the gay rights rally said it was one of the most unique events the school has sponsered.
2. However, the participants in the rally said the media was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt badly that the crowd became unruly and the organizer said he was embarassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Needless to say, next year the rally will be planed better.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas is going to be punished.
6. The first-place award, that was an engraved silver bowl, was received by the class valedictorian.
7. The three top restaurnteurs in the city provided food for the banquet, but over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health, that investigates such cases, said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgement on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Irregardless, alot of people were laying on the ground, holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know who he should blame, and he said he was moving towards a solution to the mystery of revealing whose responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
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ReplyDelete1. The people who attended the gay rights rally said, “It was an unique event the school sponsored.”
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said the media was annoying when it converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt badly that the crowd became unruly and the organizer said, “He was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.”
4. Next year the rally will be planed better.
5. Not one of the five students involved in the fracas are going to be punished.
6. The class valedictorian received the first-place award, which was an engraved silver bowl.
7. The three top restaurants in the city provided food for the banquet, but over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health, which investigates such cases, said the food smelled and tasted good, but it is withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were lying on the ground, holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom he should blame, and he said he was moving towards a solution to the mystery of revealing who's responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. The people that attended the gay rights rally said, “ it was one of the most unique events the school has sponsored”.
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said, “the media was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones”.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly and the organizer said, “he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained”.
4. Next year, the rally will be planned better.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas is going to be punished.
6. The first-place award, that was an engraved silver bowl, was received by the class valedictorian.
7. The three top restaurants in the city provided food for the banquet, but over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health, that investigates such cases, said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were laying on the ground, holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know who he should blame, and he said he was moving towards a solution to the mystery of revealing whose responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. The people who attended the gay rights rally said it was one of the most unique events the school has sponsored.
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said the media was annoying. They converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt badly the crowd became unruly. The organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Needless to say, next year the rally will be planed better.
5. Not one of the five students involved in the fracas will be punished.
6. The first-place award, an engraved silver bowl, was received by the class valedictorian.
7. The three top restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, but over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health that investigates such cases said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know who he should blame, he said he was moving towards a solution to the mystery of revealing who’s responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. The people that attended the gay rights rally said, “It was one of the most unique events the school has sponsored.”
ReplyDelete2. The participants in the rally said, “The media was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.”
3. Some of the speakers felt badly that the crowd became unruly. The organizer said, “He was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.”
4. Needless to say, next year the rally will be planned better.
5. Of the five students involved in the fracas, none will be punished.
6. The 1rst place award, that was an engraved silver bowl, was received by the class valedictorian.
7. The three top restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, but over 200 people had gotten sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health, that investigates such cases, said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know who he should blame. He said he was moving towards a solution to the mystery of revealing who’s responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. The people who attended the gay rights rally said, “It was an unique event the school sponsored”.
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said the media was annoying when it converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly; the organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Needless to say, next year the rally will be planned better.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas will be punished.
6. The first-place award, an engraved silver bowl, was received by the class valedictorian.
7. The three top restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, but over 200 people became sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health, which investigates such cases, said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know who he should blame; he said he was moving towards revealing who’s responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. The people who attended the gay rights rally said "It was a unique event that the school sponsored".
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said the media was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly, and the organizer said he was embarassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be better planned.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas are going to be punished.
6. The first-place award, an engraved silver bowl, was given to the class valedictorian.
7. The three top restaurants in the city provided food for the banquet, over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health, that investigates such cases, said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgement on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. People were laying on the ground, holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know who he should blame, and said he was moving towards revealing whose responsible for the food poisoning.
1. The people who attended the gay rights rally said it was one of the unique events the school has sponsored.
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said the media were annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad when the crowd became unruly and the organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planned better.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas are going to be punished.
6. The valedictorian received the first-place award, which was an engraved silver bowl.
7. Although the three top restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The city Board of Health, which investigates such cases, said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom he should blame, and he said he was moving towards a solution to the mystery of revealing who’s responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. Every one that attended the gay rights rally said it was of the unique events the school has sponsered.
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said the media were annoying when it converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers believed the crowd became unruly and the organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4.Next year the rally will be planned better.
5. Not one of the five students involved in the fracas is going to be punished.
6. The first-place award, which was an engraved silver bowl,was received by the class valedictorian.
7. The three top restaurants in the city provided food for the banquet; over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The city Board of Health, which investigates such cases, said the food smelled and tasted good, but they're withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were lying on the ground, holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom he should blame, and he said he was moving towards a solution to the mystery of revealing who's responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. The people who attended the gay rights rally said it was one of the unique events the school has sponsored.
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said the media were annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad when the crowd became unruly and the organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planned better.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas are going to be punished.
6. The valedictorian received the first-place award, which was an engraved silver bowl.
7. Even though the three top restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The city Board of Health, which investigates such cases, said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom he should blame, and he said he was moving toward a solution to the mystery of revealing who’s responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1.The people who attended the gay rights rally said, “It was a unique event the school sponsored.”
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said that the media was annoying when they approached the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. The speakers felt badly when the crowd became unruly. The organizer said that he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year, the rally will be planned better.
5. The five students involved in the fracas will not be punished.
6. The valedictorian received the first-place award, an engraved silver bowl.
7. The top three restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet. However, more than 200 people became sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health said that the food smelled and tasted good. However, they are withholding judgment until the food is tested.
9. Regardless, people were lying on the ground, holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know who is to blame. He is moving towards a solution by revealing who is responsible for the food poisoning.
Nastalsia said:
ReplyDelete1. Everyone that attended the gay rights rally said it was one of the unique events the school has sponsered.
2. However, the participants in the rally said the media were annoying when it converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad the crowd became unruly and the organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planned better.
5. Not one of the five students involved in the fracas is going to be punished.
6. The first-place award, which was an engraved silver bowl, was received by the class valedictorian.
7. The three top restaurants in the city provided food for the banquet; over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The city Board of Health, which investigates such cases, said the food smelled and tasted good, but it is withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9.Regardless, a lot of people were lying on the ground, holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom he should blame, and he said he was moving towards a solution to the mystery of revealing who's responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. The people who attended the Gay Right's rally said, "It was one of the unique events the school have sponsored."
ReplyDelete2. The participants in the rally said, "The media was annoying when they converged the speakers with the cameras, and microphones."
3. The speakers felt badly that the crowd became unruly; the organizer said that he was embarrassed when the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be better planned.
5. None of the students who were involved in the fracas will be punished.
6. The class valedictorian recieved the engraved silver bowl first place award.
7. The top three restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, but more than 200 people became sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health, who investigates such cases said, "The food smelled and tasted good." However, they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food are tested.
9. Regardless, many people were laying on the ground; holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom to blame, and said, "He was moving towards a solution to the mystery of revealing who's responsible for the food poisoning outbreak."
1. The people who attended the gay rights rally said, “It was a unique event the school has sponsored.”
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said, “The media was annoying when they approached the speakers with cameras and microphones.”
3. The speakers felt badly when the crowd became unruly. The organizer said that he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year, the rally will be planned better.
5. The five students involved in the fracas will not be punished.
6. The valedictorian received the first-place award, an engraved silver bowl.
7. The top three restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet. However, more than 200 people became sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health said that the food smelled and tasted good. However, they are withholding judgment until the food is tested.
9. Regardless, people were lying on the ground, holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know who is to blame. He is moving towards a solution by revealing who is responsible for the food poisoning.
1. The people who attended the gay rights rally said, “It was a unique event the school sponsored.”
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said, “The media was annoying when they approached the speakers with cameras and microphones.”
3. The speakers felt badly when the crowd became unruly. The organizer said that he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planned better.
5. The five students involved in the fracas will not be punished.
6. The valedictorian received the first-place award, an engraved silver bowl.
7. The top three restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet. However, more than 200 people became sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health said that the food smelled and tasted good. However, they are withholding judgment until the food is tested.
9. Regardless, people were lying on the ground, holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know who is to blame. He is moving towards a solution by revealing who is responsible for the food poisoning.
1.The people who attended the gay rights rally said, “It was a unique event the school sponsored.”
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said that the media was annoying when they approached the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. The speakers felt badly when the crowd became unruly. The organizer said that he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year, the rally will be planned better.
5. The five students involved in the fracas will not be punished.
6. The valedictorian received the first-place award, an engraved silver bowl.
7. The top three restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet. However, more than 200 people became sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health said that the food smelled and tasted good. However, they are withholding judgment until the food is tested.
9. Regardless, people were lying on the ground, holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know who is to blame. He is moving toward a solution by revealing who is responsible for the food poisoning.
1. The students that attended the gay rights rally said it was one of the unique events the school had sponsored.
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally stated that the media were annoying when they covered the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad when the crowd became unruly; the organizer said he became embarrassed when some of the participants started too complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planned better.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas are going to be punished.
6. The first-place award, which was an engraved silver bowl, was received by the class valedictorian.
7. The top three restaurants in the city provided foods for the banquet were over 200 people became sick after the event.
8. The city board of health, that investigates such cases, stated the food smelled and tasted fine, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, many people were lying on the ground, holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom to blame, claiming he was moving towards a solution to the mystery, by revealing who’s responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
emily says:
ReplyDelete1. The people who attended the gay rights rally said, “It was an unique event that the school had sponsored.”
2. However, the participants in the rally said the media was annoying when it converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. A few of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly, and the organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Needless to say, next year the rally will be planed better.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas is going to be punished.
6. The first-place award was an engraved silver bowl. It was received by the class valedictorian.
7. The top three restaurants in the city provided food for the banquet; however over 200 people became sick after the event.
8. The city board of health that investigates these cases said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom he should blame, and said he was moving towards a solution that would reveal who’s responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. The people who attended the gay rights rally said it was one of the most unique events the school has sponsored.
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said the media was annoying when it converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly. The organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planned better.
5. Not one of the five students involved in the fracas is going to be punished.
6. The first-place award, which was an engraved silver bowl, was received by the class valedictorian.
7. The top three restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, and over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The city Board of Health, which investigates such cases, said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom he should blame, and he said he was moving toward a solution to the mystery of revealing who’s responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. The people who attended the gay rights rally said it was one of the unique events the school has sponsored.
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said the media were annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad when the crowd became unruly and the organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planned better.
5. The five students involved in the fracas will not be punished.
6. The valedictorian received the first-place award, an engraved silver bowl.
7. The top three restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet. However, more than 200 people became sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health that investigates such cases said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know who he should blame, he said he was moving towards a solution to the mystery of revealing who’s responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
Chynna Colbert
ReplyDelete1. The people who attended the gay rights rally said “It was an unique event the school sponsored.”
2. However, the participants in the rally said “It was annoying when the media converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.”
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became rude, and the organizer said, “He was embarrassed when the participants complained.”
4. Next year the rally will be planned better.
5. Not one of the five students involved in the fracas is going to be punished.
6. The first-place award, which was an engraved silver bowl, was received by the class valedictorian.
7. Three top restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, but more than 200 people became sick after the event.
8. The city board of health, which investigates such cases, said, “The food smelled, and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, many people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom he should blame, and he said, “He was moving toward a solution to the mystery of revealing who was responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.”
1. The people who attended the gay rights rally said it was one of the unique events the school has sponsored.
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said the media were annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad when the crowd became unruly and the organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planed better.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas are going to be punished.
6. The class valedictorian received the first-place award, which was an engraved silver bowl.
7. Although the three top restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The city Board of Health, which investigates such cases, said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom he should blame, and he said he was moving towards a solution to the mystery of revealing who’s responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. The people who attended the gay rights rally said “It was a unique event that the school had sponsored.”
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said the media was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly, and the organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planed better.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas are going to be punished.
6. The valedictorian received the first-place award, which was an engraved silver bowl.
7. Even though the three top restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The city Board of Health, which investigates such cases, said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom he should blame, and he said he was moving toward a solution to the mystery of revealing who’s responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
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ReplyDeleteStephanie
ReplyDelete1. The people who attended the gay rights rally said, “It was an unique event the school sponsored.”
2. However, the participants in the rally said, “The media was annoying when it converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.”
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly, and the organizer said, “He was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.”
4. Next year the rally will be planned better.
5. None of the five students involved, in the fracas is going to be punished.
6. The first-place award was an engraved silver bowl, and was received by the class valedictorian.
7. The three top restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet; but over 200 people became sick after the event.
8. The city board of health, which investigates this case said, “The food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.”
9. Regardless, a lot of people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom he should blame and he said, “He was moving towards a solution to the mystery of revealing who is responsible for the food poison outbreak.”
1. People that attended the gay rights rally said it was one of the most unique events the school had sponsored.
ReplyDelete2. The participants in the rally said the media was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly and the organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planed better.
5. None of the students who were involved in the fracas will be punished.
6. The first-place award, an engraved silver bowl, was given to the class valedictorian.
7. The food was provided by the top three restaurants in the city, but over two hundred people got sick after the banquet.
8. The City Board of Health said the food smelled and tasted good, but they were withholding judgment on the illness until the food could be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know who to blame. He said he was moving towards a solution to the mystery of who was responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. The students who attended the gay rights rally considered it to be a unique event that the school sponsored.
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said the media were annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad when the crowd became unruly. The organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be better planned.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas are going to be punished.
6. The class valedictorian received the first-place award; which was engraved in a silver bowl.
7. The three top restaurateurs’ in the city provided food for the banquet; but over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health (that investigates such cases), said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Many people were laying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom he should blame.He said he was moving towards a solution to the mystery of revealing whose responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. People that attended the gay rights rally said it was one of the most unique events the school had sponsored.
ReplyDelete2. The participants in the rally said the media was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly and the organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planed better.
5. None of the students who were involved in the fracas will be punished.
6. The first-place award, an engraved silver bowl, was given to the class valedictorian.
7. The food was provided by the top three restaurants in the city, but over two hundred people got sick after the banquet.
8. The City Board of Health said the food smelled and tasted good, but they were withholding judgment on the illness until the food could be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know who to blame. He said he was moving towards a solution to the mystery of who was responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
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ReplyDelete1. Those who attended the gay rights rally said it was a unique event.
ReplyDelete2. However, participants at the rally said the media was irritating when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly and the organizer said he was embarrassed when some complained.
4. Next year the rally will have better planning.
5. No student involved in the fracas will be punished.
6. Class valedictorian won the first-place award, an engraved silver bowl.
7. The top restaurateurs in the city provided food, with over 200 people getting sick after the banquet.
8. The City Board of Health, that investigates such cases, said the food smelled and tasted fine, but are withholding judgment on the illness until the food is tested.
9. Regardless, a number of people were lay on the ground, and held their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector said he was moving towards a solution that will pinpoint who is responsible for the food poisoning.
1. Those who attended the gay rights rally said it was a unique event.
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said the camera crew was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly; the organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. The rally will be planned better for next year.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas is going to be punished.
6. The class valedictorian received the first-place award, an engraved silver bowl.
7. The three top restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, but more than 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The city board of health, that investigates such cases, said the food smelled good and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food is tested.
9. Regardless, many people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom he should blame, and said he was moving toward a solution as to who is responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. The people who attended the gay rights rally the event was unique.
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants at the rally said the media was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly. The organizer said he was embarrassed that some of the participants complained.
4. Needless to say, next year’s rally will be planned better.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas will be punished.
6. The first-place award, an engraved silver bowl, was given to the class valedictorian.
7. The three top restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, but more than 200 people got sick.
8. The City Board of Health, which investigates such cases, said the food smelled and tasted good, but will withhold judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, many people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector said he was moving towards a solution to find who’s responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. The people who attended the gay rights rally said it was a unique experience.
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said the media was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly; the organizer said he was embarassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year's rally will be better organized.
5. Not one of the five students involved in the fracas is going to be punished.
6. The first-place award, which was an engraved silver bowl, was received by the class valedictorian.
7. The three top restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, but over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health, which investigates such cases, said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgement on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were laying on the ground, holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector said he was moving towards a solution as to who's responsible for the food poisoning.
1. The people that attended the gay rights rally said it was an unique event the school has sponsered.
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said the media was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly and the organizer said he was embarassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planned better.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas is going to be punished.
6. The first-place award, that was an engraved silver bowl, was received by the class valedictorian.
7. The three top restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, but over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The city board of health, that investigates such cases, said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were laying on the ground, holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know who he should blame and he said he was moving towards a solution to the mystery of revealing whose responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. The people who attended the gay-rights rally said that it was unique.
ReplyDelete2. According to the participants of the rally, the media was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. The organizer felt embarrassed when some participants complained and the speakers felt bad when the crowd became unruly.
4. Next year the rally will be planned more efficiently.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas are going to be punished.
6.class valedictorian received the first-place award, which was an engraved silver bowl.
7. The three top restaurnteurs in the city provided food for the banquet, but over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health, who are investigating the case explained the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgement on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, many people were lying on the ground, holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom he should blame, and he said he was moving towards a solution as to who's responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. The people that attended the gay rights rally said it was a unique event.
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said the media was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly, and the organizer said he was embarassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planed better.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas is going to be punished.
6. The first-place award, an engraved silver bowl, was received by the class valedictorian.
7. The three top restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, but over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health, said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, many people were lying on the ground, holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know who he should blame, and he said he was moving towards a solution as to who's responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. The people that attended the gay rights rally said it was a unique event.
ReplyDelete2. The participants in the rally said that the media was annoying.
3. The organizer of the event was embarrassed when the crowd became unruly and participants complained.
4. The rally next year will be planned better.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas is going to be punished.
6. The first place award was presented to the class valedictorian.
7. The top three restaurants in the city provided food for the banquet. Unfortunately, 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The City Board of Health is with holding judgment on the illnesses until food can be tested.
9. Many people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The City Health Inspector said he is moving towards revealing who’s responsible for the food poising out break.
1. The people that attended the gay rights rally said it was a unique event.
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said the media was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly, and the organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planed better.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas is going to be punished.
6. The first-place award, an engraved silver bowl, was received by the class valedictorian.
7. The three top restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, but over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The city board of health said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, many people were lying on the ground, holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know who he should blame, and he said he was moving towards a solution as to who’s responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
Maya Smith
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1. The people that attended the gay rights rally said it was one of the unique events the school has sponsored.
2. However, the participants in the rally said the media was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly, and the organizer said he was embarrassed when the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planned better.
5. None of the students involved in the fracas are going to be punished.
6. The first-place award, an engraved silver bowl, was received by the class valedictorian.
7. 200 people became sick after eating food from the banquet provided by the top three restaurateurs in the city.
8. The City Board of Health implied the food tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food is tested.
9. Many people were lying on the ground in pain.
10. The city health inspector was moving towards a solution to the mystery of revealing who’s responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
Dionna Austin
ReplyDelete1. The people that attended the gay rights rally said it was one of the unique events the school has sponsored.
2. However, the participants in the rally said the media was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad that the crowd became unruly, and the organizer said he was embarrassed when the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planned better.
5. None of the students involved in the fracas are going to be punished.
6. The first-place award, an engraved silver bowl, was received by the class valedictorian.
7. Two-hundred people became sick after eating food from the banquet provided by the three top restaurateurs in the city.
8. The City Board of Health implied that the food tasted good, but they are withholding judgments on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Many people were lying on the ground in pain.
10. The city health inspector was moving towards a solution to the mystery of revealing who’s responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
Kristie
ReplyDelete1. The people attended the gay rights rally said “It was a unique event the school sponsored.”
2. However, the participants in the rally said the media was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt badly that the crowd became unruly and the organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planned better.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas is going to be punished.
6. The class valedictorian received the first-place award, an engraved silver bowl.
7. The three top restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, but over 200 people became sick after the event.
8. The city board of health said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, many people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom he should blame. He said he was moving towards a solution as to who is responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. The people who attended the gay rights rally said the event was unique.
ReplyDelete2.However, the participants in the rally admitted the media were annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers admitted they felt bad that the crowd became unruly. Also, the organizer said he was embarrassed when some participants complained.
4. It is needless to say that next year’s rally will be better planned.
5. The five students involved in the fracas will not be punished.
6. The class valedictorian received the award, an engraved silver bowl.
7. Although the city’s top three restaurateurs provided food for the banquet, over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The city board of health is withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested, although they did say the food’s smell and taste was good.
9. Many of the people were lying on the ground; holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom he should blame, saying he was moving towards a solution as to who is responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.
1. the people who attened the gay rights rally said it was an unique school sponsored event.
ReplyDelete2. However;the participants in the rally said the media was annoying when they converged on the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt bad when the crowed became unruly; the organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. needless to say, next year the rally will be planed better.
5.
1.The people who attended the gay rights rally said, “It was a unique event the school sponsored.”
ReplyDelete2. However, the participants in the rally said that the media was annoying when they approached the speakers with cameras and microphones.
3. Some of the speakers felt badly that the crowd became unruly and the organizer said he was embarrassed when some of the participants complained.
4. Next year the rally will be planned better.
5. None of the five students involved in the fracas is going to be punished.
6. The first-place award, an engraved silver bowl, was received by the class valedictorian.
7. The three top restaurateurs in the city provided food for the banquet, but over 200 people got sick after the event.
8. The city board of health said the food smelled and tasted good, but they are withholding judgment on the illness until the food can be tested.
9. Regardless, a lot of people were lying on the ground holding their stomachs in pain.
10. The city health inspector wanted to know whom he should blame, and he said he was moving toward a solution to the mystery of revealing who’s responsible for the food poisoning outbreak.